Can you give me feedback on these lyrics? The song is a Medieval Fantasy track about a charismatic business man with friends in low places. Trust and Loyalty are key.
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I get rather desperate, I'm relentless, I got friends the kind that
Risk all to support me, through the storms we see the strength in having
Mates you can depend on in the trenches when your back is turned if
You know all my secrets and you keep them
In between you and me than
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When you're in the sticks and the whole world turns against ya
If you stand up let your mouth run like me.
You find out real quick who your fine fair weathered friends are
And I've got mates like you wouldn't believe
Oh loyalty runs deep we go thick as thieves
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I get into mischief ain't been caught yet cause I manage to keep my
Hands clean why would I bring any knives into a banquet when my
Friends can understand that if you needed anything than you can
Just call your in my halls take a load off
Cause if I'm good for something at all its
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When you're in the sticks and the whole world turns against ya
If you stand up let your mouth run like me.
You find out real quick who your fine fair weathered friends are
And I've got mates like you wouldn't believe
Oh loyalty runs deep we go thick as thieves
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My back never itches if you catch my drift
It's just good business to be scratching backs
Call it a backed investment
Your secret's safe inside these walls
But know before you get involved
You tell one Graeme a secret than you've told them all
I mean it Lad don't mean to brag but I got cats I keep in bags
I got contacts I know a man for every task you name it I got mates for that.
Honest truth on Dathport blue I'd die for them I'd die for you
Ride or die for every time you ride with me I promise you
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When we're in the shit and the whole world turns against us
If you stand up let your mouth run with me.
You'll find out real quick who your fine fair weathered friends are
And you've got mates like you wouldn't believe
Oh Loyalty runs deep so
We go thick as thieves oh
You've been good to me now
We'll be thick as thievesmore