Spoken word over a Nappy Notez beat 🔥 looking for actual feedback on where I can improvemore

A spoken word (or spoken rap) freestyle over a beat produced by Nappy Notez. Coming to all streaming platforms on September 1st.more

➡️ Follow Memories Of My Own https://www.facebook.com/MemoriesOfMyOwn https://www.instagram.com/memoriesof_myowntx/ https://www.tiktok.com/@memoriesofmyown https://x.com/MemoriesOfMyOwn https://open.spotify.com/intl-es/artist/2B9EOhlqQUx4oOBiZZklns Special Thanks to: Mix and Mastering/ Julian Andre Rodriguez https://www.thepoweredattic.com/ ➡️ Videographer/ @Official.RVRNCElive https://www.youtube.com/@Official.RVRNCElive The Abyss Lyrics: As we fall we see the fire and the reckoning This descent won’t take long our hope is all gone Buried in our shame to feed the flames of agony We’ve known it all along that we weren’t worthy The chains of defeat have left it’s mark on me And still I’m calling but there’s no mercy It’s hard to believe this harsh reality I bow to no king But face the tragedy As we fall we see the fire and the reckoning This descent won’t take long our hope is all gone Buried in our shame to feed the flames of agony We’ve known it all along that we weren’t worthy Tie the noose and forgot the image that you had of me Cut me loose to the black abyss of the souls that you deceived I long for that day that I finally look you in the face Nothing left to say for the selfish mistakes that we can’t erase I can’t escape visions of dying We’ll never win this war we’re fighting Let in the demon and fight until the end Until the bitter end Unleashing vengeance and furry Murderous intent All shall fear me Unending burning and searing The facing of those who come near me I won’t be the victim within this catastrophe The souls you lead astray Will see no sanctuary I found my purpose inside this abyss of disarray There’s nothing more to say No watch my soul decay As we fall we see the fire and the reckoning This descent won’t take long our hope is all gone Buried in our shame to feed the flames of agony We’ve known it all along that we weren’t worthy We’ve known all along That we weren’t worthymore