This Track is my first ever brazilian Phonk Track. In my opinion I think i captured the vibe quite good. But still I need some advice how to better. Y'all got some for me?more

Instagram: dxvxnghxst1 (follow me💫) (prod.davonghost) LYRICS: All of a sudden It's cold outside My love is poison I got too many lives In the palm of my hand And I'm trying my best Not to hurt them My breath is in the air Fill my lungs with medicine It's freezing out here Can you please let me in Fight me fight me- You always wanna fight me Help me understand Cause things starting to get ugly You can hate me Don't break me I got tens that wanna date me You talk to other men But can't easily replace me My breath is in the air Fill my lungs with medicine Its freezing out here Can you please let me in She tried to replace me But baby you know that I’m crazy I’m sorry you don’t wanna date me But lately I’m sad on the daily Just let me in baby We can be just friends baby Know I love you So I don’t want this to end baby If we meant to be then We gon meet again baby I need no hoes I’ll be fine with just one lady You ask me why I'm late again I don't know what's going on You don't wanna talk to me But I'm all your favorite songs What the hell you doing here I don't know what's going on You hate me or you love me Hurry up and pick one- All of a sudden It's cold outside My love is poison I got too many lives In the palm of my hand And I'm trying my best not to hurt them My breath is in the air Fill my lungs with medicine It's freezing out here Can you please let me in My breath is in the air Fill my lungs with medicine It's freezing out here Can you please let me inmore

(prod.davonghost) LYRICS: Tryna stay one step ahead Hope they don't wanna see me dead I don't wanna kill myself I'm praying that I don't drown Tryna find the surface cause I'm gasping for air Inhale Exhale Inhale Exhale I can't tell if I'm breathing- breathing Smoke in my eyes so I can't see This ecstacy got me dreaming I'm leaving Inhale Exhale Inhale Exhale I can't tell if I'm breathing- breathing Smoke in my eyes so I can't see This ecstacy got me dreaming I'm leaving Tryna stay one step ahead Hope they don't wanna see me dead I don't wanna kill myself I'm praying that I don't drown Tryna find the surface cause I'm gasping for air Inhale Exhale Inhale Exhale I can't tell if I'm breathing- breathing Smoke in my eyes so I can't see This ecstacy got me dreaming I'm leaving Tryna stay one step ahead Hope they don't wanna see me dead I don't wanna kill myself I'm praying that I don't drown Tryna find the surface cause I'm gasping for air more