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A mental health song with female vocals. This song is about feeling fed up with life, but having the epiphany that you have more to give, and shouldn't give up on living. I'd love any feedback on this song, how does it make you feel? Is it something you could relate to? Could you find yourself enjoying this piece? Id love any feedback good or bad, thankyou! Peacemore

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