Can you give me feedback on these lyrics? The song is a Medieval Fantasy track about a charismatic business man with friends in low places. Trust and Loyalty are key. . . I get rather desperate, I'm relentless, I got friends the kind that Risk all to support me, through the storms we see the strength in having Mates you can depend on in the trenches when your back is turned if You know all my secrets and you keep them In between you and me than . When you're in the sticks and the whole world turns against ya If you stand up let your mouth run like me. You find out real quick who your fine fair weathered friends are And I've got mates like you wouldn't believe Oh loyalty runs deep we go thick as thieves . I get into mischief ain't been caught yet cause I manage to keep my Hands clean why would I bring any knives into a banquet when my Friends can understand that if you needed anything than you can Just call your in my halls take a load off Cause if I'm good for something at all its . When you're in the sticks and the whole world turns against ya If you stand up let your mouth run like me. You find out real quick who your fine fair weathered friends are And I've got mates like you wouldn't believe Oh loyalty runs deep we go thick as thieves . My back never itches if you catch my drift It's just good business to be scratching backs Call it a backed investment Your secret's safe inside these walls But know before you get involved You tell one Graeme a secret than you've told them all I mean it Lad don't mean to brag but I got cats I keep in bags I got contacts I know a man for every task you name it I got mates for that. Honest truth on Dathport blue I'd die for them I'd die for you Ride or die for every time you ride with me I promise you . When we're in the shit and the whole world turns against us If you stand up let your mouth run with me. You'll find out real quick who your fine fair weathered friends are And you've got mates like you wouldn't believe Oh Loyalty runs deep so We go thick as thieves oh You've been good to me now We'll be thick as thievesmore