Really interesting song you've made here... The percussion sounds like something straight out of a lo-fi track but its paired with a completely different genre, and honestly? I think it works! I appreciate that you tried something different even if it isn't the type of music you normally make. It sounds pretty good to me!
I've wanted to give a little try at hardcore. I ended up making something completely chill instead lol.
Constructive criticism is accepted!! It's… more
I gotta admit, you've made a pretty catchy track here. It got my foot tapping right away and managed to keep that same energy through the whole song! In terms of constructive criticism, I'd say that you can definitely afford to ease up on the loudness and give all your instruments more room to breathe. During some of the more intense parts of the song the percussion kind of gets lots within the chaos of it all and its moments like that where I would take a quieter, but richer sounding song over a louder, more compressed one. Great sounding stuff despite the nitpicks!