I'm lookin' for opinions and feedback on my recent song House of Macabre! I'll cut you a deal. If you leave me legit feedback I will give feedback to your songs in return! <3 Scratch my back, scratch yours ^^more

[Please give actual feedback] This is an Arcane inspired song. I was really attached to the idea of how one small event waterfalls into war and the weak become snake like to survive it. I wanted to touch on that but I don't know if I have captured it well enough. Does it slap?more

I desperately need feedback! Please lemme know your thoughts and how to improve!more