nice production and clean playing mixing and all. I'm not a big fan of the 3-2-3-2-3-2 vocalization early on, seems a bit annoying and not really warranted by the story in my view. but the story shines thru and the passion in the singing makes up for it later in the song. nice ending mirroring the beginning.
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