Looking for real feedback should I change or add something or take something off ? should make the track more grander or should i add a vocal i really want to know? I hope you enjoy this more

Another edm beat trying to keep it simple , I need real feed back please. Hope you enjoy. If you love it please support me by downloading this track at one of my links. more

Simple Edm Track from my moved to mars edm beat pack coming out soon .. I need real feedback please.. Can download here https://djloonitune.gumroad.com/l/martiantaggedmore