A lil sumn I made for an upcoming project. Honest critique would be highly appreciated more

This song has been one of my most popular in terms of my sound cloud analytics. I produced everything myself on this track from the guitar, to the vocals!!! Please give an honest listen and critique of what I can do better! Check me out on soundcloud too! Drop that follow. Does this slap??? ;) Much love <3 more

Something I whipped up as a side project. Thoughts? Honest critique please! Thank you. more